Muuuuch better than Tuesday, Matthew. You've staged the action and performance so it's much more readable and the held pause before the clown pops out makes the action clearer and the comedy stronger.
You'll need to tidy up the model - she has some strange gaps and overlaps in the course of the scene, but you're probably onto that.
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Muuuuch better than Tuesday, Matthew. You've staged the action and performance so it's much more readable and the held pause before the clown pops out makes the action clearer and the comedy stronger.
You'll need to tidy up the model - she has some strange gaps and overlaps in the course of the scene, but you're probably onto that.
Good work. You get a sticker.
cheers,
Greg
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